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VOICE [Ferriswheelshipping dojinshi] Page 1 by AvisFortuna VOICE [Ferriswheelshipping dojinshi] Page 1 by AvisFortuna
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Too many words, not much happening. Sorry guys. I know you probably want to see some action and scenes, but, hey I need to start SOMEHOW, right?

I wanted to start with some of N's inner questioning and confusion, but we'll have Touko on scene next page. This is more like prolouge of some sort... I guess. Let me know what you think!


Next update on friday!
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As always, you're free to be critical. If you think it sucks, tell me why and I'll think about mistakes I made.
Anyway, thanks a lot for viewing!
Have a nice day!

Also, you can look at some other great, well-done and all around worth watching and reading dojinshi;
:iconreaperoftthenight: ->[link]
:iconelmocrazy:->[link]
:iconiam-hungry:->[link]
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I do not own Pokemon, if I would, it would no longer be a show for little children.

-Avis
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leontinees Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014
Only the first page and itīs already so touching! :tears:
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shinyfeatherleader Featured By Owner May 16, 2013
Just beautiful!!!!! add to favorites NOW!!!!!
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g33ksp33k Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
agfsaHDad; this was so dramatic and i absolutely love the thoughts, especially the ones regarding the ideals and such. FAV!
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SkyexJill Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oWWW!!! THIS SO AMAZING!!
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RemaNigia Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:wow: oh...my...GOSH!!!!
I LOVE THIS AS MUCH AS THE COVER!!!!!!!! T^T this paage is so powerful, the dreamy effects, N's position really expresses inner turmoil, and the phrases are sad and sweet.
:iconsadfaceplz: sad just like the first, but also soo pretty <:3
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firehorse6 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow!!! This is simply beautiful!!! :iconcryforeverplz:
Uwaahhh NNNNNN
im so excited to know more
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FieryFafar Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Student Writer
AAAAA AAAAAAAA AAAAAAHONESTLY THIS MADE ME SMILE AFTER A LONG WEEK AAAAAAAAAAAA A FWS DOUJINSHI AND AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA :icontearplz:
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AvisFortuna Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012
AAAAAH, So happy I made a person smile! Makes me feel like objective complete! =D
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shessyluvsrin Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Oooh that gave me goosebumps!! I can not wait to read more...(I do hope for a kiss thought! ;) )
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iam-hungry Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
So intense! XD Poor N.
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